Really touching story. The hang up/pay mechanic was suprisingly effective! Took me a little too long to realise it was the end of the game though, maybe add a end screen for dolts like me. Expanding it visually would be nice but actually I thought it was kinda powerful just as text.
Normally I don't play text adventure games, but this one caught my attention. The story was interesting, but a bit hard to follow. On the submission page you mention that the story is about multiple women and that it happens in multiple places.
I expected the story to be about one woman or to be about telephone calls people have at this one telephone booth. I would also add some art to make the story more clear, but maybe you're not good with art (me neither ;-) btw).
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Cool Idea. Liked it
Really touching story. The hang up/pay mechanic was suprisingly effective! Took me a little too long to realise it was the end of the game though, maybe add a end screen for dolts like me. Expanding it visually would be nice but actually I thought it was kinda powerful just as text.
Normally I don't play text adventure games, but this one caught my attention. The story was interesting, but a bit hard to follow. On the submission page you mention that the story is about multiple women and that it happens in multiple places.
I expected the story to be about one woman or to be about telephone calls people have at this one telephone booth. I would also add some art to make the story more clear, but maybe you're not good with art (me neither ;-) btw).